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The Bio was very quick from date to date.
An area of improvement for you my good man, would be to be careful about your punctuation marks! Other than that great job!
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I agree with Alex, I think you need to slow down and expand on some things.
I think you should give more details.
I think you should put more color into the blog. It needs more brightness instead of just plain black and white!
I think you need to change the color because it look very dark:)
You could have added a few more fun facts
I love your blog! But, I think you should have added more colors.
Just add more detail.
Great job. Just needs alittle more detail though.
The Bio was very quick from date to date.
ReplyDeleteAn area of improvement for you my good man, would be to be careful about your punctuation marks! Other than that great job!
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ReplyDeleteI agree with Alex, I think you need to slow down and expand on some things.
ReplyDeleteI think you should give more details.
ReplyDeleteI think you should put more color into the blog. It needs more brightness instead of just plain black and white!
ReplyDeleteI think you need to change the color because it look very dark:)
ReplyDeleteYou could have added a few more fun facts
ReplyDeleteI love your blog! But, I think you should have added more colors.
ReplyDeleteJust add more detail.
ReplyDeleteGreat job. Just needs alittle more detail though.
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